Maybe

July 22, 2011
By ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."


Maybe his smile means more than a hello.
Maybe his blue eyes find me beautiful.
Maybe his words mean more than they seem.
Maybe he's within my reach, could be mine, he's my dream.

Or maybe I'm just a fool...


The author's comments:
"He loves me, he loves me not, he loves me, he loves me not..."

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on Jan. 16 2013 at 4:00 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

very very cute and nice! Can you comment and rate some of my work?

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 9:54 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Beautifully written. I love this! Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!

on May. 2 2012 at 11:48 am
curlygurlray GOLD, Visalia, California
18 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
you have the life you let yourself take.

I LIKE THIS(: IT SHOWS TRUE CONFLICT.

on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:20 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Thanks. =) I will!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 3:09 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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This is uber lovely. Check out my poem 'On our Own' thanks.

on Nov. 9 2011 at 4:44 pm
PriscillaAnn GOLD, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"In this life, we take our chances and in the end, the best we can hope for is that the thrill of the moment was worth the price we paid."

This is simple and adorable. I love it(: Check out some of my work? thanks!

on Nov. 4 2011 at 8:54 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Of course, thank you. =)

on Nov. 4 2011 at 8:51 am
AmayaSakaruta, Borger, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
From out of the night that covers me, black as the pit from pole to pole, i thank whatever gods may be, for my unconquerable soul. -William Earnest Henley
Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil. -the Bible

this reallyt expresses what you feel like wen you cant tell wheather soeone likes you or not! man this is good, you should keep writing. (its alwatys a poet's job to just tell the truth)

btw could you pleeeeassseee look at some of my work?


Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 8:58 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Wow, I really like this. Reminds me of my latest conquest, just kidding, kind of. Seriously, great poem. Could you please, please, please check out some of my work?

on Sep. 5 2011 at 3:20 pm
LihuaEmily SILVER, North Kingstown, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"It is said that there's no such thing as a free lunch. But the universe is the ultimate free lunch." -Alan Guth

Lovely! I know ... you never really know, do you? But sometimes life is funny and things turn out nothing like you thought they would. That's pretty much what this verse says, I think.

on Aug. 14 2011 at 5:45 pm
inkblot13 PLATINUM, Auburn, New York
41 articles 1 photo 162 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If I knew where poems came from, I'd go there"




- Michael Langley, 'Staying Alive'

Wow, this was amazing, I really liked it a lot.  The hope and feeling in each line was put through to the reader nicely. And good job on making me think about this one guy right now, that's what writing is about. Making others feel what you want them to.

SamE


on Aug. 14 2011 at 2:14 pm
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided." Dumbledore, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling.

This is good. :) The hope in each maybe.

on Aug. 11 2011 at 9:19 pm
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
30 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream

I get this:) mine always had green eyes...lol:) i really like it! And if you wana check out any more of mine...you know where to find me

on Aug. 11 2011 at 2:52 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Sure! =)

on Aug. 8 2011 at 7:36 pm
BriBear143 BRONZE, New Brighton, Minnesota
2 articles 3 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Duck and covor..it always works"

This was really good! it totally discribes how i feel. Maybee you could check out my work sometimee?? (:

LivEvil BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 8:14 pm
LivEvil BRONZE, Mooresville, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it doesn't make sense it makes sense to the senseless-me!
Normalicy is subjective, and your opinion is wrong.

This is neat! I enjoyed it, I know you have already checked out of my poems but maybe you could read my stories called Jagger and Unlikely? I'd really love it if you could, thanks!

RMicchelle said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 5:22 pm
RMicchelle, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
You don't have to like me... I like myself, and that's enough

"When life gives you lemons it better give you sugar too or your lemonade is going to suck."

Hey, this was pretty awsome. I love how it sys so much in a few simple short lines. Fantastic.

Oh, and can you check out my fiction story, " Underneath the covers"? I really want it published in the magazine.


on Aug. 4 2011 at 1:30 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Thanks, this actually was a journal entry. =)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 1:52 pm
I love this! Its cute and sort of witty. Kind of like a journal entry turned poem. Cute and relateable!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 1:47 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Thanks =)


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