July 22, 2011
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Maybe his smile means more than a hello.
Maybe his blue eyes find me beautiful.
Maybe his words mean more than they seem.
Maybe he's within my reach, could be mine, he's my dream.

Or maybe I'm just a fool...

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In_Love_with_Writing said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 4:00 pm
very very cute and nice! Can you comment and rate some of my work?
so_joy said...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 9:54 pm
Beautifully written. I love this! Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!
curlygurlray said...
May 2, 2012 at 11:48 am
Mimi15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 3:09 pm
This is uber lovely. Check out my poem 'On our Own' thanks.
ElleNicole replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 5:20 pm
Thanks. =) I will!
PriscillaSmiles This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 4:44 pm
This is simple and adorable. I love it(: Check out some of my work? thanks!
AmayaSakaruta said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 8:51 am

this reallyt expresses what you feel like wen you cant tell wheather soeone likes you or not! man this is good, you should keep writing. (its alwatys a poet's job to just tell the truth)

btw could you pleeeeassseee look at some of my work?

ElleNicole replied...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 8:54 pm
Of course, thank you. =)
Lexie96 said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 8:58 pm
Wow, I really like this. Reminds me of my latest conquest, just kidding, kind of. Seriously, great poem. Could you please, please, please check out some of my work?
LiliPRI This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 5, 2011 at 3:20 pm
Lovely! I know ... you never really know, do you? But sometimes life is funny and things turn out nothing like you thought they would. That's pretty much what this verse says, I think.
inkblot13 said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 5:45 pm

Wow, this was amazing, I really liked it a lot.  The hope and feeling in each line was put through to the reader nicely. And good job on making me think about this one guy right now, that's what writing is about. Making others feel what you want them to.


EyesofBlueFire said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 2:14 pm
This is good. :) The hope in each maybe.
SavannahMcKenna said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 9:19 pm
I get this:) mine always had green i really like it! And if you wana check out any more of know where to find me
BriBear143 said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 7:36 pm
This was really good! it totally discribes how i feel. Maybee you could check out my work sometimee?? (:
ElleNicole replied...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 2:52 pm
Sure! =)
livEvil said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 8:14 pm
This is neat! I enjoyed it, I know you have already checked out of my poems but maybe you could read my stories called Jagger and Unlikely? I'd really love it if you could, thanks!
caprifox97 said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 5:22 pm

Hey, this was pretty awsome. I love how it sys so much in a few simple short lines. Fantastic.

Oh, and can you check out my fiction story, " Underneath the covers"? I really want it published in the magazine.

DreamsAreBroken said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 1:52 pm
I love this! Its cute and sort of witty. Kind of like a journal entry turned poem. Cute and relateable!
ElleNicole replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 1:30 pm
Thanks, this actually was a journal entry. =)
ohheyyyelli said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 11:11 am
Completely relatable! I love this poem[:
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