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the fear of losing you

July 22, 2011
By jsunshine234 BRONZE, Laguna Niguel, California
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jsunshine234 BRONZE, Laguna Niguel, California
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Why cant you notice? don't you care? help me. hear my scream, everything is fading. walking through portables of emptiness where am i? and where are you?cant you see i am hurt. i end up on the last portable i see all our memories do you remember? i start spinning and fall into the river of my tears pick me up take me away

© Colleen F., Marblehead, MA

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me and my best friend had a fight and i felt like it was the end of our friendship.i made this for her so she would find the message behind this.
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