Your words can knock me down, but I will always rise from the ground. You can leave me stranded and wounded, but it will only make me more determined. You can leave me to face the dark night, I will shine like a light and face any fight. Through any troubles or sorrows, I know I will face a better day tomorrow. I'm just one girl, stuck in a flawed world, ready to face it all.
Good job! I love your point in this. Work on using more descriptive language and painting a picture in the readers head to pull them in a little more.
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