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July 25, 2011
By JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
27 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is what it is


Supermans out fighting crime Batmans still not far behind Spiderman is doing the same Joker locked up in prison chains pinnochios still made of wood on the traintracks is The Little Engine That Could in the woods you'll see Red Riding Hood now every things all nice and good.


The author's comments:
I have to have somthing funny to get over sometimes and this piece is one of my LOL pieces.

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austenite GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:44 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

I liked this poem - especially the humorous yet slightly satirical/mocking tone directed at what is inherently "good/evil" in the world. Great job!

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 8:47 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

I agree with JoPepper; your poems are really good, but the formatting is a little confusing....

Dark_Mind GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 11:18 am
Dark_Mind GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
11 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sounds like a Personal Problem."

This is really good, very humorous, I loved it.

on Aug. 3 2011 at 4:04 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

I love this only thing that needs fixing is the formatting.  But I love your poems, they have such a great rythem.  Keep it up!!!!! ;D

on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:58 pm
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
39 articles 9 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not saying anything, I'm just saying.

Everything is so peaceful and good. Great!!!!!!!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 2:52 pm
marissa87 BRONZE, Glenmoore, Pennsylvania
4 articles 3 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is popular is not always right and what is right is not always popular

i like this one alot! i admire people who can write about the happy things in life. i think we need more people like you who can do that. I cant. I think it is soo creative!

 


on Aug. 1 2011 at 5:54 pm
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk" -H.W. Hegel

"Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic' -Albus Dumbledore

Sometimes poems in this format are hard to read, but it was very clever to link all of the different stories.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:46 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
I like it! Good job! :)

wasps said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:00 pm
wasps, Other
0 articles 0 photos 153 comments

Ha ha ha, yes, very LOL :)

Just next time, you should put like each saying (you know ... like .... oh, i cant think of the word, but you know what i mean :D) on different lines :)

 



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