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When I was alone
Everything went around
Then my happiness was gone
It was not just me, for loneliness I had found

Was made to think all over again and again
Of what I had lost and wrong done
Conceivably, I would feel in vain
And think to fulfill my destiny and wills

Was made to creep deep into my sorrows
And to think apparently of my fails
Logically, not wanting a life as it pointlessly goes
For how I missed good times I was on

Perhaps, I did thank loneliness
But not with him, went further
He heartlessly jumped into me without my expectation.
Chased loneliness and slightly thought of being filled with mirth and never just bother.



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AyeshaLiveLaughLove said...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 12:06 pm:
First of all, great poem!  The message of this poem was present throughout and the way you gave it increasingly more power was through your outstanding sense of  language. I applaud you for this amazing piece!
 
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toniteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:22 am:
i can totally relate
 
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Fairy_Me said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 2:17 am:
I love this poem!!
 
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POET_MAN16 said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:58 am:
loneliness sucks make friends and u wont b lonely btw it was an amazing poem lol:)
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 11:58 am :
u r awesome dude! ;) thanx btw...
 
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josika said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 10:18 am:
awesome poem! like it a lot!
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 12:00 pm :
i shud be thankful, anyway! ;)
 
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zee11 said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 9:47 am:
You've got a nice way of putting your feelings down in words...keep it up!!!!
 
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POET_MAN16 said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 1:15 am:
very good keep up the good work
 
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Lit.roxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 9:15 am:
creative!!!luv your work...
 
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