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at first i was lost,
but now i am found,
heartbreak was my cost,
until you came around,

consumed by the dark,
until you showed me light,
you are my love,
you are my life,

to some your not perfect,
to me you always are,
you are my hope,
you are my star,

i promise to love you,
to never break your heart,
because id love it,
if we never split apart.



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PainfullyShyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 5:53 am:
I really like this peice. I can tottally feel the connection you have with the person that you wrote this for.
 
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MissUnderStood.2011 said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 12:12 pm:

 is very beautiful :)

Check out me poems

 
silver47 replied...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 9:36 pm :

thank you and i will definatly

 

 
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