My Lover With A Heart Of Steel

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She loved me with a heart of steel.She took my dream and made it ours.She led my young heart with her hands and carefully rolled with it in her undeniable swagger. She entered the room with the aura of a champion and aroma of a queen.She gave up her youth for my sake.She saw it natural to age with my heart and want for picayune interests.She said a prayer in my name and saved me from my falling grace.She was the mediator between life and death and the one who saw it fit to play terminator when death wouldn't hear plead. She is my queen from a different age, a woman with a new kind of strength.She is my queen, my falling star, my wish come true, my hope in all. She is my light, my prophesied love, my world one and only all day,everyday. She taught it wise to love me when i didn't love me. She didn't think it wrong to love a desolate lone dreamer and share with him his dreams and thoughts and see them to fulfillment and encourage him to carry on his own dreams. She gave up her world to save mine, that action, that deed is why i am here and singing.





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Izaac96 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 4:01 pm
THANKS hANN...GOD BLESS!!!!!
 
HannSawyer15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 3:19 pm
Simply. Amazing. This was really great... 5 stars!
 
blondekaylee said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 10:55 pm

hey, this is really great

 

 
Izaac96 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 4:06 pm
anx...ur freaally good tooo!!!!!!!!
 
CountryGirl31297 said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 8:28 pm
awww! thats so sweet :) can you check out my poems? you're really good btw!
 
Izaac96 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 4:09 pm
thank you so much!
 
HannahMarie17 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 7:32 pm
This is beautiful! Wow...makes me really believe in love! Please keep writing
 
Izaac96 replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 9:37 pm
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!...IT MEANS A LOT!
 
ErisRose said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:39 pm
This is so cute! Great job!! check out some of my work if you get a chance!
 
Izaac96 replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 4:50 pm
TTHank you so much and definiletly ..i willl..thanks again
 
Little-Irish-Girl said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 8:41 am
That was so sweet and so well written. It made my heart melt. Diffinitely keep writing. You did a great job. :)
 
Izaac96 replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 4:50 pm
Thank You!
 
Little-Irish-Girl replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 6:57 pm
Your so welcome!
 
Music0609 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 4:50 pm
Way to keep love optimistic :) People nowadays really need it. This is really good, Keep writing!!! :)
 
Izaac96 replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 10:42 pm
AWWW...THANKS A MILLION!
 
Cizarina said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 3:26 pm
Isaac, that's a wonderful piece of writing you have there. I'm proud of you :) please hold on to that, and trust God for that too :)
 
Izaac96 replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 3:34 pm
THank You !
 
chimzy said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 11:39 am
great job son! im mucho proud of you
 
Izaac96 replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 2:44 pm
Aunty Chimzy!!!!!!! i miss you so much! thank you for comment!!!!!!!!
 
Rosieb said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 9:34 am
Nicely done, deeply felt and can be applied to so many loving relationships.
 
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