My Lover With A Heart Of Steel

July 26, 2011
By Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill


She loved me with a heart of steel.She took my dream and made it ours.She led my young heart with her hands and carefully rolled with it in her undeniable swagger. She entered the room with the aura of a champion and aroma of a queen.She gave up her youth for my sake.She saw it natural to age with my heart and want for picayune interests.She said a prayer in my name and saved me from my falling grace.She was the mediator between life and death and the one who saw it fit to play terminator when death wouldn't hear plead. She is my queen from a different age, a woman with a new kind of strength.She is my queen, my falling star, my wish come true, my hope in all. She is my light, my prophesied love, my world one and only all day,everyday. She taught it wise to love me when i didn't love me. She didn't think it wrong to love a desolate lone dreamer and share with him his dreams and thoughts and see them to fulfillment and encourage him to carry on his own dreams. She gave up her world to save mine, that action, that deed is why i am here and singing.


The author's comments:
This one is for all the lovers that hold onto their true love no matter how hard holding on seems to be.

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Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 4:09 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

thank you so much!

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 4:06 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

anx...ur freaally good tooo!!!!!!!!

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 4:01 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

THANKS hANN...GOD BLESS!!!!!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 3:19 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There's nothing to hold on to if it's already gone."

Simply. Amazing. This was really great... 5 stars!

on Jul. 31 2011 at 10:55 pm
blondekaylee SILVER, None, Massachusetts
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hey, this is really great

 


on Jul. 31 2011 at 8:28 pm
CountryGirl31297 SILVER, Newnan, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments
awww! thats so sweet :) can you check out my poems? you're really good btw!

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 9:37 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!...IT MEANS A LOT!

on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:32 pm
HannahMarie17 BRONZE, Pasadena, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain." - Anonymous

This is beautiful! Wow...makes me really believe in love! Please keep writing

on Jul. 30 2011 at 6:57 pm
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER, Muskego, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments
Your so welcome!

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 4:50 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

Thank You!

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 4:50 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

TTHank you so much and definiletly ..i willl..thanks again

on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:39 pm
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
50 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love
Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance!
If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

This is so cute! Great job!! check out some of my work if you get a chance!

on Jul. 30 2011 at 8:41 am
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER, Muskego, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments
That was so sweet and so well written. It made my heart melt. Diffinitely keep writing. You did a great job. :)

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 10:42 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

AWWW...THANKS A MILLION!

on Jul. 29 2011 at 4:50 pm
WhatAboutNikki DIAMOND, Uncasville, Connecticut
77 articles 4 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak your mind even if your voice shakes." -Unknown
"The function of music is to release us from the tyranny of concious thought"-Unknown
"With me, poetry is not a purpose, but a passion" -Edgar Allen Poe
"Mad is stupid"-Pops

Way to keep love optimistic :) People nowadays really need it. This is really good, Keep writing!!! :)

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 3:34 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

THank You !

Cizarina said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 3:26 pm
Isaac, that's a wonderful piece of writing you have there. I'm proud of you :) please hold on to that, and trust God for that too :)

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 2:44 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

Aunty Chimzy!!!!!!! i miss you so much! thank you for comment!!!!!!!!

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 2:43 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

Thank you, Mrs. Sekel!

chimzy said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 11:39 am
great job son! im mucho proud of you


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