L-I-E

July 26, 2011
By Masterpiece21 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
Masterpiece21 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Doubt is the beginning, not the end, of wisdom


Liar.
I can see the veins under my skin,
Emptiness begging me to open it up.

Longing to bleed.
Irrational thoughts are
Easier than fighting.

Loveless.
I'm a lost cause;
Everything makes me numb.

Lifeless.
If you loved me you'd understand
Earth is hell.

Lust for
Icy metal in my flesh.
Ecstasy exists in pain.

Lover, can't you see?
I'm dying alive here.
Everyday, all I do is

L
I
E


The author's comments:
2010
All the love in the world couldn't change me.

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on Jul. 31 2011 at 1:33 pm
Dyingbreath BRONZE, Loganville, Georgia
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Ah, I see.. Well I def like this. I would put up some of my own poetry from the past but I had to throw it out

 


on Jul. 31 2011 at 2:37 am
Masterpiece21 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Doubt is the beginning, not the end, of wisdom

Yeah, I also have a history of cutting and burning. I wrote this before I stopped which was over a year ago. I found it in an old journal and thought I'd try and get some feedback.

on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:21 pm
Dyingbreath BRONZE, Loganville, Georgia
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Well, I thought it was very good. I really relate to it (in my own way I think)

I'm interested in what's behind it. For me, I see a lot of my past of cutting 


on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:54 am
Masterpiece21 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
67 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Doubt is the beginning, not the end, of wisdom

Oh, thanks so much! I wasn't so sure about this one.

on Jul. 29 2011 at 3:52 pm
Dyingbreath BRONZE, Loganville, Georgia
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Seriously good poertry

 



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