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Golden Eyes

Your face to me was flawless
Perfection at its height,
I didn't know behind
Those golden eyes
There was deception,trash and lies.

The rose you gave me
Filled with promise
That a new love brings
Wilted into dust
Now at the mercy of the wind.

The magic of your hypnotic words,
The tool for your betrayal
Blinded me from seeing
The other girl that was there.

Never again will I trust
Those golden hazel eyes
That stole from me
My heart and replaced it with
A lie.



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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 11:54 am
very beautiful and touching! great job! hey, when one of my new books called: aien invasion series: book one: the caller comes out, could youread it and post a comment sayig if u liked it or not? thanks and keep writing! Ur talented! :)(:
 
nikkigonefishin replied...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 10:36 pm
Thanks for the comment! I already read it and commented on it. I thought it was great! Keep writing:)
 
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