pride with pain

July 21, 2011
By afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
5 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It's one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn't happen like this,.....


They got to be strong, just keep pushing on,
It’s the honour on stake, each man to the country no chances of mistake.

It’s the love of the country, that keep our hearts chained,
The darkest forces will be slained
It’s not about losing life
It’s about the stain,
The mark of courage that counts for it’s pride but with pain.

The darkest force with the darkest hearts,
So blind with blood of mean,
There will be no honor for killing innocent lives, there will be no sheen.

For the divine land, each belong, courageous hearts ready to strike for a cause,
The darkest force blinded with a faith,
A faith which never gives a moving life pause.
Ruins, debris and death will only remain,
The darkest forces will certain to lose cause they
Use courage not for pride but for pain..


The author's comments:
this poetry is about the people who took significant and heart ruffling virtues like pride and honor in a wrong way....and in the wrong direction the dark forces are the groups of those people who r ruining everything that initiates mankind .....

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on Sep. 17 2011 at 12:20 pm
yes indeed she is a great poet..ma'am please enter some veteran competition..love your work

on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:59 am
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
5 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It's one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn't happen like this,.....

hey please do read and comment on my rest of the works please...

Izaac96 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 6:54 am
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

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"Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought" -Napoleon Hill

This is a very lovely poem...you should enter it in sometype of Veteran Competition..i loved your vocabulary and i love d it as a whole...Great job!

on Jul. 28 2011 at 5:21 am
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
5 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It's one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn't happen like this,.....

i can just say that the best is still unwritten...

ktrox said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 2:59 am
one more jewel added to the crown of your dedicated writing...kudos to you

on Jul. 26 2011 at 11:56 pm
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
5 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It's one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn't happen like this,.....

well that's a note worthy thought to muse.....

on Jul. 26 2011 at 12:46 pm
The evergrowing national armies for the sake of arms and strength race puts innocent lives at peril. Touching one and worth a serious thought.

bhushan said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 5:05 am
It touches me as I feel the innocent peole who lost their lives because of terrorist activities.


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