That Girl

June 27, 2011
By Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114


I can hold back crying when I'm hurt,
when I'm lost,
when I just need to go away.
But,
when a single person prays with me,
over me,
I fall apart.
I am no longer the girl who akes nothing to heart,
who never shows emotion,
I am the girl I hold back every day.
The girl that hurts on the inside everytime
they insult me,
everytime they find my faults.
Everytime I try to be myself and it's not enough.
I can hold back whats inside forever,
forever, until,
that someone prays over me,
blesses me,
compliments my life.
Someone who thinks I'm good,
sweet,
innocent.
Someone who doesn't know what is happening inside.
My thoughts,
my hopes,
the crushed dreams piling up.
But it doesn't matter.
I am a disappointment,
a problem child.
Unimportant to all.
I try and I try,
but nothing I ever do is right,
nothing is ever good enough for anyone.
Nothing ever will be.
I am nothing.



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on Aug. 17 2011 at 7:27 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

aww:) Thanks!! i guess you could say im at that point in my life where I'm kind of stuck... My ife pretty muchsucks these days and iim waiting for it to get better but i know not to get to hopeful anymore... :/ i kinda put all those feelings into my poems...

on Aug. 16 2011 at 7:23 pm
aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."

This poem almost made me cry, you write with such raw emotion that others can relate to, and makes for a beautiful poem. You are so talented!

on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:18 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

awwww:) thatnks!!!:)) <3

on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:49 pm
Cryswithaly SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was 5 my mother told me the key to life is happiness. My teacher asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. She said I didn't understand the assignment. I told her she didn't understand life.
-John Lennon (Revised)

If you write something this good and better your something!<3


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