My Rain

July 16, 2011
By megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow


Rain
splashing onto my
pale flesh
streaming down my face
gliding across my arms
drenching my hair
sitting in the damp grass
mud engulfing me
sucking at my legs
my skin
turned green by the thin
strips of plant
sticking to my thighs
but I love it
my special time
the calm splashes
allowing my escape
from troubles
as if
the little tiny droplets
could wash away
the hurt of this world.


The author's comments:
I actually do like being in the rain, it's always so cool, and calm.

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on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:54 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thanks! Im so glad you liked it!

on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:30 pm
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
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I haven't failed. I just haven't found 10,000 ways that won't work. [Thomas Edison]

When words fail, music speaks.

So cool! I also love the rain so I can totally relate to this! I really like the ending: The little tiny droplets could wash away the hurt of this world. Keep writing! :) Rating 5 stars!

on Dec. 6 2011 at 5:06 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thanks lol Im a very unique person;) lolz

on Dec. 4 2011 at 9:53 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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I thought the flow of this poem was unique! I really liked what images it brought to my mind! Great work!

on Dec. 4 2011 at 11:50 am
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thank you ;)

on Dec. 4 2011 at 11:50 am
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

 ;) Thanks i luv comments lol

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on Dec. 3 2011 at 9:44 pm
taylor1226, Alexandria, Virginia
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grrs.

I love rain and this poem.:)

on Nov. 25 2011 at 12:36 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thanks a lot! :) Thats what I was going 4 lol

 


on Nov. 25 2011 at 12:28 pm
littlelilith SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Your perspective may very well be the determining factor in whether you pass the test."

This poem was extremely beautiful. It was so detailed, and just reading it relaxed me. I like the fact that it was free-verse. The way it was written kind of reminded me of rain! Keep up the good work! :)

amanda2496 said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:45 pm
Filled with detail!!! while reading this, it felt like i was sitting in the rain. very calming!! great writing! :)

on Nov. 24 2011 at 7:46 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thanks ;) Your comment made me smile :D lol

on Nov. 24 2011 at 7:35 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I love it. Its so cute, and it makes me smilie. I think it paints a good picture too. ;)

on Aug. 21 2011 at 3:31 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thanks :) I love feedback!

on Aug. 18 2011 at 8:22 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I really like the picture this paints :) Agree with RandomInspiration- you don't waste words. Each one is just enough! Great work :)

on Aug. 16 2011 at 8:49 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thanks! :)

on Aug. 16 2011 at 7:53 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

RandomInspiration is spot on; great job!

on Aug. 16 2011 at 10:40 am
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks a lot!

on Aug. 15 2011 at 8:34 pm
RandomInspiration GOLD, Schulenburg, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh as much as you breathe, and love as long as you live <3

Love this one too! I like how you don't waste any words, you have a real gift for knowing what people like to hear and making your poems flow


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