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Rain
splashing onto my
pale flesh
streaming down my face
gliding across my arms
drenching my hair
sitting in the damp grass
mud engulfing me
sucking at my legs
my skin
turned green by the thin
strips of plant
sticking to my thighs
but I love it
my special time
the calm splashes
allowing my escape
from troubles
as if
the little tiny droplets
could wash away
the hurt of this world.



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LongLazyDays55This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:30 pm:
So cool! I also love the rain so I can totally relate to this! I really like the ending: The little tiny droplets could wash away the hurt of this world. Keep writing! :) Rating 5 stars!
 
megsloveslions replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:54 pm :
Thanks! Im so glad you liked it!
 
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samiasaskia24 said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 9:53 pm:
I thought the flow of this poem was unique! I really liked what images it brought to my mind! Great work!
 
megsloveslions replied...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 5:06 pm :
Thanks lol Im a very unique person;) lolz
 
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julywinters1226 said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 9:44 pm:
I love rain and this poem.:)
 
megsloveslions replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 11:50 am :
Thank you ;)
 
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ColorfulExpectations said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 12:28 pm:
This poem was extremely beautiful. It was so detailed, and just reading it relaxed me. I like the fact that it was free-verse. The way it was written kind of reminded me of rain! Keep up the good work! :)
 
megsloveslions replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 11:50 am :
 ;) Thanks i luv comments lol
 
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amanda2496 said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 9:45 pm:
Filled with detail!!! while reading this, it felt like i was sitting in the rain. very calming!! great writing! :)
 
megsloveslions replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 12:36 pm :

Thanks a lot! :) Thats what I was going 4 lol

 

 
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Wonderment said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 7:35 pm:
I love it. Its so cute, and it makes me smilie. I think it paints a good picture too. ;)
 
megsloveslions replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 7:46 pm :
Thanks ;) Your comment made me smile :D lol
 
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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 8:22 am:
I really like the picture this paints :) Agree with RandomInspiration- you don't waste words. Each one is just enough! Great work :)
 
megsloveslions replied...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 3:31 pm :
Thanks :) I love feedback!
 
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RandomInspiration said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:34 pm:
Love this one too! I like how you don't waste any words, you have a real gift for knowing what people like to hear and making your poems flow
 
megsloveslions replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 10:40 am :
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks a lot!
 
JerseyGirl716 replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 7:53 pm :
RandomInspiration is spot on; great job!
 
megsloveslions replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 8:49 pm :
Thanks! :)
 
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