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Glancing over to my blue and yellow,
Birds that are next to the window. Excited tweets, tweeting excites, The house which fills with light.
Chirping, they seem so happy, over chewing and sometimes laughing.
Playful pecking, no pecking tension.
But, can I please, pose a question? Ever wonder if they're not really that content, But rather in a state of constant torment?
Their minds, driven to insanity, While they tweet on a canopy.
For help they loudly cry.
And we sit idly by.
We ignore it, they implore it, they need change
Are they delighted, or are they deranged?



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hiddentears said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 4:04 am:
Wow, a amazing choice of words:). Well written.
 
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Wildflower30 said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 1:46 am:
What a nice and true thought. What wonderful wordplay... twice. :)
 
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Illuminatus said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 3:16 am:
wow ... nice work here ! you do have a thing with words , and i wish for that thing to keep going and even improve !
 
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StrangeJadeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 12:17 pm:
Very clever! :) Birds are unfathomable creatures, aren't they?
 
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