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Take my dying heart,
And tear it from my chest.
Steal away my tattered soul,
And gently lie me to rest.

For I am a broken angel,
My feathers all plucked out.
And slowly I am falling,
Onto the cold, wet ground.

My hopes and dreams have vanished,
My smile has faded dim.
From my Heaven, I was banished,
Now my future seems quite grim.

So here forever shall I lie,
Broken and defeated.
With nothing left on the inside,
'Cause my will to forge on has been depleted.



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ams98 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 8:40 pm:
i love it. thats all i can say...greeat job...keep writing:)
 
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thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 8:04 pm:
Ah, yes. I remember reading this poem before. Still though, i read it again and I am still in love with it. Great Job! `""
 
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M.Lizeth said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 4:13 pm:

This poem is extraordinary. Usually, the theme of angels and broken wings are quite a cliche, but you made it your own. I simply love the line "From my Heaven, I was banished"; it's something I've never read before. You're a great writer, and I hope to read more!

 - M. Lizeth

 
CieraDesiree replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 4:46 pm :
Thank you(:
 
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