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I Lost Her

July 19, 2011
By maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
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maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
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" Don't carry life. Let life, carry you."
- Me

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She said nothing would change
She said we'd always be friends
no matter what
well she lied;and for that
i lost her

She didn't look at me the same
Like i was a monster
She became the victim of my emotions.
Her disgusted stares cut holes in my heart.

I thought i could tell her anything
She said she didn't care
I told her how i feel
And for that i lost her.

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i told my bestfriend how i felt about her.
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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 6:45 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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Yeah, I lost my best freind of eight years a year ago... but nothing like this. This is a good poem, though.

Check out my work if you have a chance?

 

maggie.ramone BRONZE said...
on Aug. 29 2011 at 11:06 pm
maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
" Don't carry life. Let life, carry you."
- Me

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thank you so much. it really means alot <3

 

IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2011 at 6:09 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
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We all lose at least one best friend eventually, I am sorry it happened so terribly for you :( It sure made for a good poem, though. 
introducingshelby GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 8:52 pm
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
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Wow this chick you wrote about sounds like a real bitch. (winky face) Don't let the insecure get in your way, Broski.