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She said nothing would change
She said we'd always be friends
no matter what
well she lied;and for that
i lost her

She didn't look at me the same
Like i was a monster
She became the victim of my emotions.
Her disgusted stares cut holes in my heart.

I thought i could tell her anything
She said she didn't care
I told her how i feel
And for that i lost her.





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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 6:45 am

Yeah, I lost my best freind of eight years a year ago... but nothing like this. This is a good poem, though.

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maggie.ramone said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 11:06 pm

thank you so much. it really means alot <3

 

 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 6:09 pm
We all lose at least one best friend eventually, I am sorry it happened so terribly for you :( It sure made for a good poem, though. 
 
introducingshelby said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 8:52 pm
Wow this chick you wrote about sounds like a real bitch. (winky face) Don't let the insecure get in your way, Broski.
 
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