No answers

July 19, 2011
By Casual.dreamer SILVER, Bakersfield, California
Casual.dreamer SILVER, Bakersfield, California
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I look to my fingers to write out some wisdom,
I look up above to try and read the Kingdom,
I look all around, in and out, even crawl through to see,
But all I can find is there are no answers for me.

Hesitant at first to admit my feelings inside,
But as time went on, I could no longer hide.
I fell, and fell hard, and had not one regret,
When my heart found love, my mind was set.

You, you were wonderful, too good to be true,
That saying is valid, for I no longer have you.
You came and went, leaving me alone
And now I'm recovering in the place from which I was thrown.

I know more now than when first I came,
What I know now is my feelings are not the same.
So mixed up and jumbled; never making sense
The only thing clear is life is no white picket fence.

I miss falling into you, knowing that you're there,
But now I know that's with somebody else you share.
I won't ask questions because silence will follow,
But I just want to know how much longer my heart will be hollow.



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Joshua. GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 12:41 am
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

Really great!

on Sep. 16 2011 at 11:54 am
BookOwl PLATINUM, Bristol, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"It is hard to fail, but it is worse never to have tried to succeed." Theodore Roosevelt

Wow this is amazing, 5 stars:)

abbya BRONZE said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 3:43 pm
abbya BRONZE, St.Charels, Missouri
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Wow that is realy good! :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 7:47 pm
Sure thing!!!!!!!!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 5:02 pm
Casual.dreamer SILVER, Bakersfield, California
6 articles 0 photos 40 comments
Thankyou! I really appreciate your feedback.:)

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 4:47 pm

Hey! I've read a couple of your poems [including this one and "I want to be"] and I really enjoy your work. It is very relateable to anyone who has lost someone that they loved.

Lovely.



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