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Stuck and Unstuck Love This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

We were two birds stuck
On the wire between the telephone poles.
We were perched
Just far enough so our wings could not touch.
Sparks danced between us,
Sizzling on the electrical wire,
And all we could do was gaze
Into each other's beady eyes.

But when we did,
We felt like we were soaring
Above rooftops, and treetops, circling each other
But we were two birds stuck in love
On the wire between the telephone poles.
Our feet gripped and could not ungrip
We could not scoot closer,
We could not shift farther.

We looked at each other,
Sorrow in our black eyes
As we began to realize
There was no point in wasting time.
For we were two birds stuck in love
On the wire between the telephone poles.
Our talons grew tired from gripping,
Our hearts became weary of wishing,
And we little by little accepted the heartrending truth.
We could not scoot closer,
We could not shift farther.

Until one day,
A gusty wind came
And toppled our telephone poles
That had once held us in place.
We could stretch our talons.
We were two birds unstuck and free.

I flew and flew and flew away,
So shocked that I was unhandcuffed
Until I found you flew another way.
And it was with the freedom that the
wind finally gave
That I lost the love I had always meant
to save.

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Lexie96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 10:13 pm:
Yeah, I can't help but agree, this really should be published, it's great. Congrats on Editor's choice, though, that's great! This was a really good poem... and if you wouldn't mind I would love it if you could check out mine some time.
 
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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 2:15 pm:
Lol if you scroll down, you'll see that ve already read this XD. But I still think it is amazing, and again, nice job on getting the editors choice mark. I definitely hink it should be published. 5/5
 
An-eloquent-leafThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 29 at 7:24 pm :
It funny, I was looking on my profile, and noticed that two pieces on my favorites list got published (before it was just one), and I was like, whoa! :D I'm glad you finally got published, you definitely deserve it ^_^
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 29 at 7:58 pm :
Thank you! Yeah, I hadn't been on TI for a while and then i got an email saying they were going to publish it! it was really cool! It's supposed to be in febriary's issue. I'm excited to see it in print
 
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Regs_the_ShortyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 5:52 pm:
It is absolutely great I loved it 5 stars!!!
 
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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 7:23 pm:
Oh wow, beautifully written, you are very talented :)
 
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backyardheart said...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 8:06 pm:
Absolutely wonderful. The bird metaphor was great- and I especially enjoyed the last stanza, as well as the repetition of "On the wire between the telephone poles."
 
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little-miss-mistakes said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 10:23 pm:
i love this!! its sweet and sad at the same time... and i have been in a really relatable circumstance that really hits home!!! i especially love the ending
 
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BeLoveTodayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 8:29 am:
This poem was very sweet, and I enjoyed your use of bird imagery. My favorite lines were, "Our talons grew tired from gripping, Our hearts became weary of wishing." Also, I liked the realization in the last stanza, beginnng with, "I flew and flew and flew away." I would consider looking for a synonym for un-handcuffed though, because it sort of breaks up the rhythm. Overall, very nice poem! Thanks for sharing!
 
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silver_iceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 9:58 pm:
iiiii like it! it's very sweet yet kinda sad at the same time :)
 
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last-impression said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 7:39 pm:
My goodness, you're just an amazing writer. 
 
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HannSawyer15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 4:54 pm:
Imagery is really your thing! And you're great at it! Honestly I don't know why Teen Ink hasn't published you yet because you are an AMAZING writer! Simply amazing.
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 6:59 pm :
Thanks for saying that. it means so much!!! i wish i could get into the magazine, but i doubt i will with any of the works i have now because they are not the usual teenager things that the mag is looking for, i feel. :( if you know what i mean... thanks for reading my poems!
 
HannSawyer15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 7:01 pm :
I know what you mean... and yeah I understand but you should be the acception to that rule! Lol you're such a great writer!
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 7:11 pm :
i mean i am a teenager! lol, but i mean that i don't write about drugs, relationships (not exactly), or dark thoughts, wanting freedom... that kind of stuff that they are looking for. That's not my thing, really, unfortunately. i can't force myself to write like that so i will continue to write for myself first and then others second! maybe someday i'll get in...fingers crossed :) 
 
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WithPenAndScript said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 10:19 pm:
You were right they were sort of similair! This piece was so...poectic and descriptive and metaphorical...All the things i love :)
 
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JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 4:38 pm:
I really really like this I wish I had words to saay how much I liked this!!!!!!
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 4:55 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 5:12 pm :
You're welcome, I added it to faves!!!! Keep writing!!!! :))
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 5:14 pm :
You're welcome I favorited it!!!!! Keep writing!!!! :D
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 5:52 pm :
wow! Thank you ten times more! haha. That is so awesome. I'm glad you liked it so much! :)))
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 5:35 pm :
Anytime!!!!! :))
 
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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 9:36 am:
Wow. This was very well-written and powerful! Even being about birds, methaphorically, I can relate much more than I'd expect to. Great job! :)
 
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JerseyGirl716This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 2:02 pm:
Wow... That was amazing. Very, very relatable! All your metaphors were perfect and really added depth to the subject. Great job!
 
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Jesusfreak78 said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 4:45 pm:
Very good I have to say I the meaning went over my head until i looked at your explnaiton lol but that's just probably me.
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 5:01 pm :
yes, it's super metaphorical. It's a poem you really have to think about to understand. you can't just scan it over and get it! :)
 
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baller4evaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 8:18 pm:
I really like this!!!
 
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HaleyDRog. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 6:50 pm:
This poem is amazing and the theme is incredible! I loved it. I can tell you really used your heart! Keep it up!
 
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ams98 said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 6:41 pm:
wow....i love the metaphor:) it is an awesome poem:) i cant wait to read more!
 
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gigi01 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:15 am:
Wow.... very good... I especially like the last line... it perfectly ends it! Great job:)
 
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.Izzy. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:06 am:
Loved the metaphor with the birds! "Just far enough so our wings cannot touch" - Such a relatable feeling. Good job!
 
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hanging_girl_666This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:30 pm:
I love the ending. Just astounding. really. 
 
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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 8:26 pm:
i love this poem so much! my eyes are tearing up (well, actually, that's because my contacts are messing with me :) ). but still, its well written and you can feel the pain, even if it is coming out of a bird.
 
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NinjaGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 8:25 pm:
Aw, this is carefree in a way, yet sad. I know how you feel, although I haven't been able to get past the "obstacle" yet. ;)
 
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Hazel-daisyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 7:09 pm:
this is amazing, nearly made me cry! i can relate really well! its written really well and i like the feel of the poem and the words used. i like the way you use birds awel, 5/5 :)
 
CieraDesiree replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 7:35 pm :
Very Nice(:
 
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