Onyx Light

July 13, 2011
By Herusmoon BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
Herusmoon BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
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I'm proud of the work I wish to do, and not of the work others wish of me to do"


In onyx light,
We dance,
In sight.
She is nervous,
Though the stars are bright,
I wanna dance,
Tonight,
Dance with me
My lover, my light.
Tonight, we get another chance
To live our lives in bright, bright,
Onyx light.

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this piece by a dream of dancing with my significant other in the moonlight but with the moon hidden by textured glass

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on Jun. 18 2012 at 5:58 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

I find it so interesting that I can read this now without regret. It's nice to have some reminders that in the beginning it was genuine.

on Sep. 28 2011 at 11:04 pm
Herusmoon BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
I'm proud of the work I wish to do, and not of the work others wish of me to do"

HHad i not shown u this beforehand

on Sep. 28 2011 at 11:02 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

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Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

Using Onyx light is interesting. Onyx... dark, secrets, when you're actually talking about moonlight which has more of a silvery quality. I like it.


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