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Super Cereal

July 13, 2011
By annaelainethewriter BRONZE, Sharpsburg, Georgia
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annaelainethewriter BRONZE, Sharpsburg, Georgia
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Live on the edge,
you get a great view of life there.

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Once upon a time is just so cheesy and overdone,
You're always rushing toward the end,
not wanting to be outrun,
the climax must be dramatic, and be full of characters that are erratic,
the plot must be delicious and thick,
the story must pull and suck at you like a tick,
reading the story must be a great pleasure,
it must be so good,
it could not be measured.

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

The author's comments:
Writing a story can be very confusing, and is usually taken much, MUCH, too seriously. We forget why we write, and get too lost in rules and grammar. These things are important, but we forget to be humorous, and not so super serious. This is just a reminder of what writing should be like, because in the end, having great grammar, or using soulless writing is going to make people want to read what you write.
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