the pain you cause me

July 13, 2011
By remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix


You give me cramps,
With your annoying banter,
About how your mad at your friend(did I mention she’s my friend too???)
And how your house smells like your brother,
Who smells like smoke.
And how life truly hates you,
How no one understands.

You give me headaches,
With your lies.
About who said what,
About me.
How some people hate me.
But they tell me that you hate me.

You give me bad moods,
When you ignore me.
Then it gets better,
Until you call me.

You give me tears and no self pride,
When you are mean.
And tell me no one likes me,
And you tell me it’s because I’m fat.

I guess giving isn’t always good


The author's comments:
well this was about a "friend" of mine.
We dont talk alot anymore.
But this was kinda like standing up to her without saying anything to her.I was just stilling at the dinning room table,and I had just hung up with her.and this just came out.
sooo rating would be great =)

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on Dec. 20 2011 at 10:38 am
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

I feel like I have to add more to this,it ended too soon.gonna work on it.and repost

on Aug. 24 2011 at 8:34 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

since its on my article I can put in requests to delete comments,so I requested that it be deleted.but I dont know if they will.

but its okay,no one reads my poems anyways ^-^


on Aug. 24 2011 at 8:32 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

yes,what would make you think I didn't?

mhmm I do remember that but I dont know if anyone can delete coments anymore


on Aug. 19 2011 at 9:35 am
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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so, i guess that i should've asked first... do u actually want to e-mail me??

also, do u know how to delete comments??? i used to be able to... but it seems like they removed it now.. the little "Delete Comment" thing...


on Aug. 19 2011 at 9:02 am
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

hahahaha okay =)

I wasnt,my mother told me I had to sleep(I didnt)

mhmmmmmm


on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:35 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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so, turns out that i can't delete posts.. so okay, whatever..

i suppose that that shall be dealt with in a matter of time...


on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:33 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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all right, so my guess is that you're not on right now... let me know when u r back on and i'll set it back out there. until then, i'm gonna delete it, bcuz i'm not too comfortable with just having it out there...

on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:07 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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probably not... anyways, i came up with this genius idea. i give u my email here in a separate comment, u e-mail me, then i'll delete that separatecomment/post. sound good?? cool?

on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:06 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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did u get my last post??? let me know if u did. teenink has been kind of screwing up for me today...

on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:53 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

okay I will....I found it!!!!!! XD

on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:50 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

=D

how come we cant? thanks

you seem like an awesome person and friend too!!

me too ^-^


on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:47 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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btw, it's fun. at least, i think it is so.. much.. fun..

btw, if u don't want to write in mine, that's totally fine. i'd completely understand. but i really do suggest that you like, look around and find something that interests you... it's fun :DDD


on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:45 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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:D np r-m-plz!!

i must say, it's too shameful that he can't connect at all outside of this.. u seem like a really cool friend :) although, don't get me wrong, i'm enjoying this here, too..


on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:41 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

hahahahokay wow....

um yeah I think I should be able to find it.... thank you


on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:39 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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ok. so, you go to the top of the screen. Under the ad and the TeenInk name there is a link bar. Poetry, Fiction, Nonfiction..

keep going til u get to forums.

choose the one on the right.

then go to something like, "Writing Role-playing," or something to that effect. You're smart. You'll get it.

Then, you should like, totally go check out mine. It's called "The Sound of Speed."

 

:D


on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:32 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

I know! its amazing!

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. no I dont


on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:30 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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hey, i think that this is the first time that we have both been on at the same time!!!

hey, could u plz come check out my new RP?? it's called The Sound of Speed. do u know what RP's are???


on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:18 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

hahahahaaa!

yeah I can tell you are ^-^

yeah....only sometimes.....


on Aug. 18 2011 at 7:26 pm
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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yeah.. yea, tht actually would...

truth is, i'm personally more of a face-ripper XD no, in fact, i'm quite the peace-seeker and a pacifist. i think that i can see that in you, too (:


on Aug. 17 2011 at 3:57 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

hahaha! the whole ripping her head off thing is amazing,not because i want you to rip her head off,it would just be so cool if someone was really strong enough,it rip a living persons head off.

its okay =)



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