the pain you cause me

July 13, 2011
You give me cramps,
With your annoying banter,
About how your mad at your friend(did I mention she’s my friend too???)
And how your house smells like your brother,
Who smells like smoke.
And how life truly hates you,
How no one understands.

You give me headaches,
With your lies.
About who said what,
About me.
How some people hate me.
But they tell me that you hate me.

You give me bad moods,
When you ignore me.
Then it gets better,
Until you call me.

You give me tears and no self pride,
When you are mean.
And tell me no one likes me,
And you tell me it’s because I’m fat.

I guess giving isn’t always good

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remembermeplz said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 10:38 am
I feel like I have to add more to this,it ended too soon.gonna work on it.and repost
Mudder_Hacky said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 12:28 pm

btw, srry :/ i missed up. i'll click five stars next time :/ but i missed it this time, and u only got four ..

how silly of me xDD

remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 3:57 pm

hahaha! the whole ripping her head off thing is amazing,not because i want you to rip her head off,it would just be so cool if someone was really strong enough,it rip a living persons head off.

its okay =)

Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 7:26 pm

yeah.. yea, tht actually would...

truth is, i'm personally more of a face-ripper XD no, in fact, i'm quite the peace-seeker and a pacifist. i think that i can see that in you, too (:

remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:18 pm


yeah I can tell you are ^-^

yeah....only sometimes.....

Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:30 pm

hey, i think that this is the first time that we have both been on at the same time!!!

hey, could u plz come check out my new RP?? it's called The Sound of Speed. do u know what RP's are???

remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:32 pm

I know! its amazing!

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. no I dont

Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:39 pm

ok. so, you go to the top of the screen. Under the ad and the TeenInk name there is a link bar. Poetry, Fiction, Nonfiction..

keep going til u get to forums.

choose the one on the right.

then go to something like, "Writing Role-playing," or something to that effect. You're smart. You'll get it.

Then, you should like, totally go check out mine. It's called "The Sound of Speed."



remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:41 pm

hahahahokay wow....

um yeah I think I should be able to find it.... thank you

Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:45 pm

:D np r-m-plz!!

i must say, it's too shameful that he can't connect at all outside of this.. u seem like a really cool friend :) although, don't get me wrong, i'm enjoying this here, too..

Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:47 pm

btw, it's fun. at least, i think it is so.. much.. fun..

btw, if u don't want to write in mine, that's totally fine. i'd completely understand. but i really do suggest that you like, look around and find something that interests you... it's fun :DDD

remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:50 pm


how come we cant? thanks

you seem like an awesome person and friend too!!

me too ^-^

remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:53 pm
okay I will....I found it!!!!!! XD
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 10:06 pm
did u get my last post??? let me know if u did. teenink has been kind of screwing up for me today...
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 10:07 pm
probably not... anyways, i came up with this genius idea. i give u my email here in a separate comment, u e-mail me, then i'll delete that separatecomment/post. sound good?? cool?
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 10:33 pm
all right, so my guess is that you're not on right now... let me know when u r back on and i'll set it back out there. until then, i'm gonna delete it, bcuz i'm not too comfortable with just having it out there...
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 10:35 pm

so, turns out that i can't delete posts.. so okay, whatever..

i suppose that that shall be dealt with in a matter of time...

remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 9:02 am

hahahaha okay =)

I wasnt,my mother told me I had to sleep(I didnt)


Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 9:35 am

so, i guess that i should've asked first... do u actually want to e-mail me??

also, do u know how to delete comments??? i used to be able to... but it seems like they removed it now.. the little "Delete Comment" thing...

remembermeplz replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 8:32 pm

yes,what would make you think I didn't?

mhmm I do remember that but I dont know if anyone can delete coments anymore

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