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There was a girl who
Was naïve and enchanting
With beauty intoxicating
Just like Aphrodite
It was like hurricane on her face
But those blue eyes were calm
and gentle like the eye of a mighty storm
She was unhappy and in pain
In this story there was a twist in the tale

She was abducted by a male
Not a human but by a giant ape
She tried to escape but was failed
Ape was mesmerized by the beauty
And protected without any fail
He was excruciate with pain
protecting her without any wane

For her it was in cage
In front of the public eye
mocked and ridiculed upon
She tried to stop all of it
but could not do a thing
Now, it became a whole
new Broadway theme
The show freshened up the memory
of the mighty ape
broke the chromium steel chain
to meet and save the dame
She met the ape and was
Rejoicing after a very long time again
they watched the beautiful dawn
blushing in the horizon
But this was not the end

The ape was attacked again
knew it was going to be killed
but then also saved the dame
Both were crying there
heart out but could not do
anything again

There was the king falling
from the empire
with the floods of tears
breaking away

And one of the people said
that it was the plane
But the learned told that –
“As the Arabians’ said-
It was the Beauty that killed the Beast”
And this was a sad the End



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SparksFly91 said...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 3:05 am:
This is so good. Love it. New twist on a classic fairytale
 
sunshine04 replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 3:48 am :
thanks a lot it means a lot
 
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BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 6:23 pm:
I LOVE how you totally turned King Kong inside out. Great poem, great job!
 
sunshine04 replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 2:57 am :
i am sooooooooooooooo glad that u liked it :) actually i have written it so long and have mentioned all of it lol but i loved that movie a lot i cried in the end thats what i usually dont do
 
sunshine04 replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 3:48 am :
hey u said that i turned king kong inside out is in a positive way or negative way ?:)
 
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ilovewriting95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 6:34 pm:
WOw! This is really good! Great job! 5 stars!!
 
sunshine04 replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 11:11 am :
thanks really appreciate it will u send it to evey one u know i really want to be published in the magazine desperatly and i really need constructive critism plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz advice
 
sunshine04 replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 4:09 am :
can u comment and rate my newly photos
 
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sunshine04 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 4:25 am:
thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttt love u
 
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Jenny said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 4:13 am:
Very very beautiful! It's great ;)
 
sunshine04 replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 4:23 am :
thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt love u
 
sunshine04 replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 4:24 am :
thanks alottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt love u
 
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SallySunShine said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 4:10 am:
Great! You are really TALENTED!
 
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