Completion

July 17, 2011
By NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Those that care don't matter; and, those that matter don't care."


I’m not losing my mind.
It might seem so,
It’s just love I need not find.
This girl seems so thorough,
She completes me.
Just her presence makes me smile,
This is all she wants to see.
I helped her through a stage of denial.
She is grateful for the assistance.
She says she loves me for my kindness.
She has my kind of persistence,
And I enjoy the way she kisses.
She makes me feel whole.
She gives me a feeling of importance,
And that I’m never alone.
She makes me feel good about my personality as well as my appearance.
I think this could work,
Yet we are so young,
And I can be such a jerk,
But I don’t want this to be another love song to be sung.
So I’m going to give this my best,
Enjoy your outstanding beauty while your mine,
Give my hatefulness a rest,
And hope that it’s my faults love will undermine.

The author's comments:
Love: lovable, yet so unlikable

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Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 8:29 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

I agree with AustinMags. This was a really honest poem.

on Jul. 20 2011 at 10:49 pm
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those that care don't matter; and, those that matter don't care."

Thanks, thats actually what I was focused on.

AustinMags said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 10:46 pm
I think that the best part of this poem was the sincerity and just utter honestly of it. :)


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