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Completion

I’m not losing my mind.
It might seem so,
It’s just love I need not find.
This girl seems so thorough,
She completes me.
Just her presence makes me smile,
This is all she wants to see.
I helped her through a stage of denial.
She is grateful for the assistance.
She says she loves me for my kindness.
She has my kind of persistence,
And I enjoy the way she kisses.
She makes me feel whole.
She gives me a feeling of importance,
And that I’m never alone.
She makes me feel good about my personality as well as my appearance.
I think this could work,
Yet we are so young,
And I can be such a jerk,
But I don’t want this to be another love song to be sung.
So I’m going to give this my best,
Enjoy your outstanding beauty while your mine,
Give my hatefulness a rest,
And hope that it’s my faults love will undermine.





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Robyn97 said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 8:29 pm
I agree with AustinMags. This was a really honest poem.
 
AustinMags said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 10:46 pm
I think that the best part of this poem was the sincerity and just utter honestly of it. :)
 
NaleDawg replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 10:49 pm
Thanks, thats actually what I was focused on.
 
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