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Broken Heart, Lost Innocence.

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Hunger, thirst, crave.
Feed, drink, sex.
Boys are driven mad
with the thoughts they create.

I'm alone.
Infinite them. One me.
I'm taken over the edge.
I want to die.

My soul, mind, heart, body
are beaten and abused
spiritually, mentally, emotionally, physically.
I'm done. Out. Ended.

The soul occupying this body
has been through countless Hells
on the verge of light and dark.
Life and Death.

This mind housed in me
travelled though lies,rumors,truth
about to fail my being
been screamed at too often.
Too much.

My heart that lies within
has been attacked by every by-passer of the outside
ceases beating sooner than expected
caused by neglect and uncaring others.
That body that walks strong
has seen it all; from love, rape, abuse, and everything in between
collapses before your very eyes
Perfect ending to a tragic life.



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JessicaShari said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 10:21 am
I love your honesty in this. This is a beautiful example of what so many girls go through but are afraid to talk about, good job =)
 
Calyps0 said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 2:53 pm
This is beautiful. It's so--as many have said--honest and real. I love it :)
 
Angie.Hudak This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 2:41 pm
Thanks guys, check out some my new stuff when it gets posted on the website :]
 
TeenPoet said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 2:29 pm
You're really good. I liked it! Keep writing! :]
 
sunshine04 said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 3:45 am
i liked the how honest it was and yea welll written keep writing it really helps during hard times
 
lovetildeath said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 3:35 am
If that really happened my heart goes out to you but I like the sad dreary mood of the poem the ne word sentence really dramatize it.
 
ilovewriting95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 7:59 pm
Good job! I like how honest it is. You aren't trying to pretend that you are perfect and you are writing from your heart about a painful experience. I very much applaud that. Keep writing and I hope your life gets better. I have a pretty good like but I did know some really mean people in middle school and, like you, I wrote as a vent for hard times. Keep it up! Good Luck! :D
 
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