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determination

suffering loss pain
and still with everything to gain
from the bottom
of the lowest
to the best
of the best
now no one
can contest
against her will
and determination
a quality that comes
with fustration
nevertheless can
we deny
a strong willed creature
just like you and i



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Snowi said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 6:13 pm:
uuuuuummmmm..... YES!! very true! i can't believe you are so deep? do you even know that your deep? what do you think about when you write? again amazing poetry
 
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creativewritingismythingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 9:29 am:
I felt something when i read this that i can't quite place... love it though, great work
 
chrissie_star replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 10:28 am :
s... its about this woman named cupcake brown... she has a book out its called "a piece of cake" its really good i suggest u read it ^-^
 
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