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Freak Out.

What's this place?
This horrid place?
Stealing
Murder
Lying
Cheating
Killing.

What's this place?
You call it home?
I'm glad I live on cloud nine,
It's pretty nice.

But this place?
It hurts my soul,
This foul horrid place.

How can you wish for anything good here?
When all there is, is bad?
Dig a little deeper,
Under the skin.
Nope a little bit deeper into the soul
Got it.
Nope nothing, nothing there but a hole.





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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 2:37 pm
HAHA! I do love this. i am loving the last stanze, specifically the last line. i do love the spacing, that which i wish i could master.
 
AmberElisabeth replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 12:26 pm
Thank you, I never pay attention to the spacing. I just do it. Thank you though. I wish my work was as colorful and inspiring as yours.
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 11:32 pm
ha......and i dont even remeber/know you...but thanks.colorful? it must be the sarcasm.
 
AmberElisabeth replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 1:45 pm
I've been reading your work online. And, no. It's not sarcasm That would just be rude.c:
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 7:41 pm
ahhh, i see. "reading my work online..."
well thank you.
 
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