Love me? Hate me?

July 12, 2011
You make me the happiest I've ever been.
You make me the saddest I've ever been.
You put a smile on my face.
You also make me frown.
You stop tears from falling down my face,
and cause them quite a lot.
Is this love?
A misunderstanding?
I know I love you.
I want you to love me.
Your leaving across the country soon.
I want you to know
before you go.
That you're the one I want.
I love you.
And when I think about you leaving,
I die a little inside.
Disappointments, lies, LOVE.
Please love me.
Don't hate.
Do you love me??

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TeenPoet said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 2:21 pm
Thanks it really means a lot that you liked my poem. :)
lovetildeath said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 1:45 am
I like the alternating mood of the  poem.Could you read mine.
Angie.Hudak This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 7:15 pm
I really love this poem! It tells a story within using the guidelines of telling someone a story. It's really creative and well thought out :] great flow of words, too! Check out some of my writing if you want(:
UndefinedSoul replied...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 11:44 am
Thanks guys :) And sure I'll check your stuff out.
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