July 3, 2011
Do we know what
it is
sure we can look
it up
or is it just a
the world has seen no

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Ha-5-rika said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 10:49 am
Very true. I don't think there ever existed a day in the history of mankind when peace was maintatined all over the globe.
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:22 pm
i agree it's hasn't been done maybe someday..
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 3:21 pm
i like it and yeah i agree, its true :)
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 10:34 pm
thanks appreciate it :P
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:13 pm
This isn't your best poem, but it's not bad.  And it's true 'the world has seen no peace' for a very long time.
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:14 pm
i know i think my strongest r my metaphors and thank u :P
Delictious said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:17 pm
Very interesting.. I like the style!
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 11:37 pm
r u just being nice to me? this isn't my strongest poem but thanks
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