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In the Morning

July 3, 2011
By Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments

The world is dark,
The fog lies low,
A rooster crows,
No.

I warm by the fire,
I stare at its glow,
No.

My mind is in a haze,
My brain is numb,
No.

The sun begins to rise,
The fog begins to clear,
A rooster crows,
I weep.

The author's comments:
This is a poem, from the eyes of Peter Jesus' desciple.
Matthew 26:75 Then Peter remembered the word Jesus had spoken: " Before the rooster crows twice, you will disown my three times." And he went outside and wept bitterly.

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on Sep. 21 2011 at 6:58 am
Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments
Thanks guys :) I wasn't sure if people would actually like it... so thanks for commenting!

on Sep. 20 2011 at 11:58 am
AliveInHim BRONZE, Glenside, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
When I am weak, then I am strong.

I love this!!!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:04 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

Oh yes, I know this. I love the way you portrayed the denial, or the disowning, and the rhyme adds a lot to it. This is really good. :)