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Darkness of light

July 3, 2011
By Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"


my darkness of the light,
the body bleeds with fright,
the emotion gone,
not another word will sound,

why would i have to see this,
why must this be,
the man with no emotion will lay there and bleed

light in the darkness,
your soul had to leave,
even though we will miss you,
you no longer have to bleed,
you are safe now,
the world will not harm you,
for you are more alive then us,
and we are dead to you.


The author's comments:
are you living or are you dead, if you are dead and your love ones are not there are you dead or alive

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on Jul. 26 2011 at 10:32 am
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

thanks i really apreceat that :D

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 6:19 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Very dark. But it's still pretty good. You and your poetry reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe. And I LOVE his poetry! :)

on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:26 am
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

i don't know how or why, its like im an expert in psychology but never studied it

on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:25 am
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

well i had to put down a baby rabbit but this poem don't even describe the pain i felt when i had to do that. especially when i can feel the soul of every living thing. i have too much empathy. i can look into a cats eyes and know how he/she is feeling and know what they want. same thing with people, i just know things about somebody and what there thinking just looking at them

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:00 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Oh sorry..!May I know who made you depressed...???And 'm not able to reply to you on the forums...:(I dont know wat went wrong...??

on Jul. 17 2011 at 1:57 pm
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

i was a little depressing that day :(

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 1:49 pm
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Hey but I like happy poems..But ur poem good...And sad...:(

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 9:18 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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ur welcome :D

on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:54 pm
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

exactly what i was going for :D thanks for agreeing with me i loved making this poem :D

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:59 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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unbelievable, seriously. it's a sad poem :'( but its full of meaning!! a different perspective of death.