Darkness of light

July 3, 2011
my darkness of the light,
the body bleeds with fright,
the emotion gone,
not another word will sound,

why would i have to see this,
why must this be,
the man with no emotion will lay there and bleed

light in the darkness,
your soul had to leave,
even though we will miss you,
you no longer have to bleed,
you are safe now,
the world will not harm you,
for you are more alive then us,
and we are dead to you.





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Aderes18 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 6:19 am
Very dark. But it's still pretty good. You and your poetry reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe. And I LOVE his poetry! :)
 
The.Messenger.777 replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 10:32 am
thanks i really apreceat that :D
 
sakina said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 1:49 pm
Hey but I like happy poems..But ur poem good...And sad...:(
 
Christian.a.piper replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 1:57 pm
i was a little depressing that day :(
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:00 am
Oh sorry..!May I know who made you depressed...???And 'm not able to reply to you on the forums...:(I dont know wat went wrong...??
 
The.Messenger.777 replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:25 am
well i had to put down a baby rabbit but this poem don't even describe the pain i felt when i had to do that. especially when i can feel the soul of every living thing. i have too much empathy. i can look into a cats eyes and know how he/she is feeling and know what they want. same thing with people, i just know things about somebody and what there thinking just looking at them
 
The.Messenger.777 replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:26 am
i don't know how or why, its like im an expert in psychology but never studied it
 
Anagam said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:59 pm
unbelievable, seriously. it's a sad poem :'( but its full of meaning!! a different perspective of death.
 
Christian.a.piper replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 5:54 pm
exactly what i was going for :D thanks for agreeing with me i loved making this poem :D
 
Anagam replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 9:18 pm
ur welcome :D
 
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