My Apologises

July 3, 2011
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I apologize for that I could be not as your shadow.
But, I always treat you as for a much wished and ever loving friend.
Always I try to draw near, like, you the left eye while I’d be the
right, wonder you know!
As in words, that’s never to face an end.

I apologize for that I couldn't be a part of your tears.
But, I do never wish a tear drop to fall from your eyes,
In your sorrows, promise that I'll ever be near,
And to keep up your mirth, not as if it just dies.

I apologize if I hadn't come about with what you wished to know.
But, still I be sincere and so awfully generous to you,
Like the comfort and chillness felt of the heavy rain while I’m at the window,
Where, I ever willingly feel free and mind, refreshed so as new!

I apologize for that my mistake made you upset in anyway.
But, I wish you be not heartbroken with any I've wrong done,
Even if I'm not so good, I’ll not let you go astray,
And if it's an error, I'd say it was all well done unless you know
you've wrong done.

Greatly apologize if I had ever called you my friend.
Since you're more than the best I find,
Wish all my time you there to spend.
And eternally find you still lovely the same in my thoughtful mind.

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Toran said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 6:05 pm
I really liked this...Kinda wish lots of guys would say stuff like this...Great Job! :)
Sabee said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 2:46 am
it remains me of my frnd who was so close to me and still he is...
Ella1 said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 12:15 pm
This was amazing! It's so sincere and meaningful, you really did a good job. Would you mind reading my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea if you get a chance?
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 5:18 am
Thanks! Sure I will. Check out my other articles, too. . Then, u knw wat to do! ;)
beachgal123 said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 7:34 am
This is really good i love the wording :)
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 2:14 am
Tnx a lot! Btw, wats ur ambition?
tonite said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:23 am
amazing!!!!!....i wish i had someone like that
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 11:33 am
Perhaps, its good to have a couple of friends by ur side, than to have a GF!! LOL
POET_MAN16 said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:59 am
good job man it was an honest and amazing poem
JamesODalaigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 2:40 pm
I really admire its magnanimous nature, its veracity.
SeasofSorrow said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 10:26 am
Raw emotion...very honest! nice job! :)
Muzee3 replied...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 10:29 am
u've got style.... know what i mean.. :) tnx
zee11 said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 9:52 am
AWESOME!!!!...Love it...keep writing...:)
EmoAngel18 said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 4:24 pm
this poem is really amazing. id have to say u do write better poems than me....but lately my poems havent been good cuz ive been so busy with school and my family.
Muzee3 replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 8:10 pm
Yah..... But I still say those aren't the best u cn do.. :)
EmoAngel18 replied...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 6:17 pm
yeah true, resently i wrote a poem and i dedicated it to my oldr brother........he's in the military
Lit.rox This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 9:17 am
nice..i gave this five stars..
Muzee3 replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 8:08 pm


I checked your article too.. :)

ahmedstki said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 6:21 am
I add this too.!!!!! XOXOXO
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