Cloud Nine

July 12, 2011
Hold your breath
Take it in
Let your mind resign
Things will change
People grow
Given proper time
Kick back
Watch the stars align
Drift away, stay the day
Floating on cloud nine

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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 3:51 pm
Short, sweet, and to the point! Most poetry is heavily descriptive, but it's nice to have a smattering of some that aren't. Great job! :)
samiasaskia24 replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:00 pm
Yeah!!!! Simple description of everything that needed to be said.
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