Through my hair

July 12, 2011
By SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
30 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream


When the sun shines through the air,
And lightens the color of my hair.
I can't help but think of you,
While I'm warm from my head to my shoe.
But soon my thoughts can't be for you my dear,
Or i may accidentally spill a tear.
And here.as the suns not above my head,
It's now time for me to go to bed.
As i begin to sleep you once again fill my mind,
And you remind me of how the sun once shined.

The author's comments:
This is one of my all time favorite poems I've ever written in my entire life. One of the only ones that rhyme too:)

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on Aug. 3 2011 at 8:09 pm
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
30 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream

Thanks...but i loved you poem....you can check out my other stuff and lemme know your thoughts on those if you want..:)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 10:09 pm
Vam_apperatus_vampire, Petaluma, California
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Never give up on your dreams even if it seems like you should.

Yeah and your work is really much better than mine :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:48 pm
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
30 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream

That really means alot to me.....were you the annonomys

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:09 am
Vam_apperatus_vampire, Petaluma, California
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up on your dreams even if it seems like you should.

wow your really really good. your better at writing poems than i am


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