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July 12, 2011
By AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
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AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

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“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

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My free days are spent all alone.
I try too fill the fear

But it always fails.

I have everyone I need.

Its the one I want who I don't have.

Lonely days are filled with sound,
I turn up the music and let it take me.

I want someone too trust,
Share secrets with.

Why do I behave like this?
Because I'm scared?

No,
It's the lack of trust.

© Cherri L., Cerritos, CA

The author's comments:
I was missing my x-best friend who one day decided she wanted nothing too do with me. </3
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AllysonMarie GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 3:58 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

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Thanks! I really appreciate the feed back! (:
AllysonMarie GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:32 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
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“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

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Thank you so much!

 

HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:08 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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A few errors, but really good. Nice job!
emanmkhan SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 1:33 pm
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Wow. It felt as if I was feeling the mood of this poem. Nice way to end the poem. Five stars for you! :)
NinjaGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 12:54 pm
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This is the best of your poems. I like the lines "Lonely days are filled with sound. I turn up the music and let it take me." Again, a few small errors, but a good piece.