TRUST

July 12, 2011
By AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”


My free days are spent all alone.
I try too fill the fear

But it always fails.

I have everyone I need.

Its the one I want who I don't have.

Lonely days are filled with sound,
I turn up the music and let it take me.

I want someone too trust,
Share secrets with.

Why do I behave like this?
Because I'm scared?

No,
It's the lack of trust.


The author's comments:
I was missing my x-best friend who one day decided she wanted nothing too do with me. </3

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on Feb. 4 2012 at 3:58 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Thanks! I really appreciate the feed back! (:

on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:32 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Thank you so much!

 


on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:08 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

A few errors, but really good. Nice job!

on Jul. 15 2011 at 1:33 pm
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"People will forget what you said. People will forget what you did. But people will never forget how you made them feel.\" Maya Angelou

Wow. It felt as if I was feeling the mood of this poem. Nice way to end the poem. Five stars for you! :)

on Jul. 15 2011 at 12:54 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

This is the best of your poems. I like the lines "Lonely days are filled with sound. I turn up the music and let it take me." Again, a few small errors, but a good piece.


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