I Dream Of A Life

July 12, 2011
By AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”


Beyond this little house,little city,wonder awaits for me.
I dream of living a magical life,
Filled with castlyes,princes and dragons.

I look up out beyond the stares and can't help but think this isn't the life for me
I dream of living a magical life,filled with dark magic and love.

I walk the soft sanded beach and wonder what wonders could await below the sea.
I dream of living a magical life, filled with mermaids and talking sea critters.

When I awake in the morning
I realize that beyond this little house and city,
wonder awaits for me,
But until then,
I'll just have too live in the moment.....


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was in one of my dark places. I felt that no one understood me and that I didnt belong in this life. Please comment on it! It wasnt one of my greatest peices but..I guess its not one of my wrost!

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.


on Aug. 16 2012 at 8:21 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Thank you. But, I do not intend to change any of my original writing, Ill have time in the future to improve.! Thanks.

on Mar. 4 2012 at 11:49 am
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Thanks everyone! And, I know many of my poems can use some work! But, I perfer too just post the original pice. That way, it shows my true emotion while I was writing it. (:

on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:15 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Some spelling errors, but this one was amazing! I really liked this one!

on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:05 pm
Silent_Artist SILVER, Selma, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day I'm gonna run away and never come back and when I come back I'm gonna be the knife master" - Jimmy The Rev Sullivan. Not much of a deep meaning but it makes me laugh.

Castles and stars are spelled wrong. Besides that, It's a nice poem.

on Jul. 15 2011 at 12:39 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

Good concept, although the poem itself could definitely be improved. I like your descriptions of the places you dream of living. My favorite stanza is the last one :)


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!