I Dream Of A Life

July 12, 2011
Beyond this little house,little city,wonder awaits for me.
I dream of living a magical life,
Filled with castlyes,princes and dragons.

I look up out beyond the stares and can't help but think this isn't the life for me
I dream of living a magical life,filled with dark magic and love.

I walk the soft sanded beach and wonder what wonders could await below the sea.
I dream of living a magical life, filled with mermaids and talking sea critters.

When I awake in the morning
I realize that beyond this little house and city,
wonder awaits for me,
But until then,
I'll just have too live in the moment.....

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AllysonMarie said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 11:49 am
Thanks everyone! And, I know many of my poems can use some work! But, I perfer too just post the original pice. That way, it shows my true emotion while I was writing it. (:
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 12:39 pm
Good concept, although the poem itself could definitely be improved. I like your descriptions of the places you dream of living. My favorite stanza is the last one :)
Silent_Artist replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:05 pm
Castles and stars are spelled wrong. Besides that, It's a nice poem.
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:15 pm
Some spelling errors, but this one was amazing! I really liked this one!
AllysonMarie replied...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 8:21 pm
Thank you. But, I do not intend to change any of my original writing, Ill have time in the future to improve.! Thanks.
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