Story of a girl

July 12, 2011
By pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
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You drove me to this you know,
To the pain I feel inside
If your love had only shown,
Maybe I wouldn’t have wanted to die
I told you so many times about the way that I had felt
But you never would listen until I began to melt
Until I began to bleed
And I thought you had no choice but to see,
To see the cause of all my scars
But no, you still sat there and looked at me as if I was from mars
Then I asked to be sent away
Thinking that would change my pain
But you said no and now this is not a pain that can be changed
It is forever here never to be rearranged
You could have stopped this you know
If only your love had shown


The author's comments:
People always seem to judge a person by the way they look or act. This is kinda like an incite for people.

You see a pretty girl and it seems she has everything and should want nothing but stop judging people! you don't know the pain she hides or the cuts or bruises she covers up. You have to stop assuming. Maybe if people opened there heart and ears instead of just there eyes then things would be better.

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on Dec. 29 2011 at 10:01 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

I love this oh so much!!!

ams98 said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 10:21 am
ams98, Brighton, Michigan
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This is so true and a lesson i think a lot of people need to learn...not to judge...

really well written and i love ur whole idea for it:)


on Aug. 5 2011 at 11:56 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

u write great poems and everybosdy says o i can relate but i feel weird i can't relate to most i've never even had a bf but i ove ur poems they r trully beautiful

 


on Aug. 1 2011 at 1:20 pm
I agree with this perfectly! I relate to it and i love this!

on Jul. 23 2011 at 5:22 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Woah. Very poetic. Amazing.

on Jul. 22 2011 at 5:22 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

the melt/bleed connection is fresh and poetic!

gigi01 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 11:51 am
gigi01 GOLD, Seffner, Florida
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Very well written and touching!

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:10 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

One of my friends could have written this. :P But we're listening, and she's (finally) talking. All's well that goes well, I guess.

Thanks for the comment on Please!



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