Story of a girl

You drove me to this you know,
To the pain I feel inside
If your love had only shown,
Maybe I wouldn’t have wanted to die
I told you so many times about the way that I had felt
But you never would listen until I began to melt
Until I began to bleed
And I thought you had no choice but to see,
To see the cause of all my scars
But no, you still sat there and looked at me as if I was from mars
Then I asked to be sent away
Thinking that would change my pain
But you said no and now this is not a pain that can be changed
It is forever here never to be rearranged
You could have stopped this you know
If only your love had shown





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hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 10:01 pm
I love this oh so much!!!
 
ams98 said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 10:21 am

This is so true and a lesson i think a lot of people need to learn...not to judge...

really well written and i love ur whole idea for it:)

 
musicispassion said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 11:56 pm

u write great poems and everybosdy says o i can relate but i feel weird i can't relate to most i've never even had a bf but i ove ur poems they r trully beautiful

 

 
DreamsAreBroken said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 1:20 pm
I agree with this perfectly! I relate to it and i love this!
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:22 pm
Woah. Very poetic. Amazing.
 
Zildjian This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 5:22 pm
the melt/bleed connection is fresh and poetic!
 
Robyn97 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 12:10 pm

One of my friends could have written this. :P But we're listening, and she's (finally) talking. All's well that goes well, I guess.

Thanks for the comment on Please!

 
gigi01 replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:51 am
Very well written and touching!
 
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