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Lost Inside my World

July 9, 2011
By live.laugh.write. BRONZE, Braintree, Massachusetts
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live.laugh.write. BRONZE, Braintree, Massachusetts
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I don't know what to say, or even how to say it.
I've been lost inside hoping to find my way out,
But the pathway is gone and I'm stumbling, trying to find an exit.
Desperation and exhaustion burst from me
And the only relief I seem to find lies within jagged edges.
My life is so confusing, it's baffled all who've tried to help.
What they don't know is, I don't want to be relieved.

© Justin W., Milford, CT

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live.laugh.write. BRONZE said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 9:51 pm
live.laugh.write. BRONZE, Braintree, Massachusetts
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Well, thanks! I don't think it's that great but you were positive about it, so it means a lot. It's the only thing I've ever really written, so I wanted to see what people thought about it...not much I guess. (: Your comment means a ton to me, makes me happy to know someone likes what I wrote. Thanks again!
Shepherd16 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 11:32 pm
Shepherd16 BRONZE, Walpole, Massachusetts
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 I like this alot. I cant quite connect to the emotion you feel, but you can tell its strong, its really raw. Good job!