July 8, 2011
Star and Angel

I thought Saturn was a star, a super star;
But was just fooling myself?
I thought an angel would have golden hair;
But was I really so blind?

A star or an angel could be anything.
A rock, or a tree, or a paper and pen.
A slug, or a fire, or a ball and chain.
A goose or a duckling;
A raven, a fool.....

But no one has been as perfect as you.

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sakina said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 4:12 am
It's nice...Y dont you check out some of my work...:)
emanmkhan said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 8:05 pm
It's a pretty simple poem, but it makes me think for a while...
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:32 pm
Very cute! I like how you say that a star and an angel could be anything. Very creative!
Silent_Artist replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:09 pm
I think you forgot to put I in the second line. Besides that, It's a fun, creative poem.
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