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In Your Palm

Death is peaceful
Death is calm
Death is beautiful
It's in your palm



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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 2:56 am
I'm glad you don't think anymore that death is, you know, a curse. :)
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 2:45 pm
i know for a fact death isn't a curse bbut a gift given to us
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:20 pm
This was very simple and fairly good.  Good work!
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:22 pm
thank u again
 
Delictious said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:14 pm
Very simple and elegant, I liked it a lot. Really powerful for such few words.
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 11:45 pm
whe i wrote it didn't make sense but i think i've might have solved it. Death is peaceful: meaning u rest no interuptions death is calm: no stress or constant mistakes death is beautiful: they get to leave us unfortunanetly but they go somewhere beautiful it's in your palm: wherever you go death is around you and your alwatys with it i probavly still doesn't make sense but thanks a bunch :P
 
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