Your Image

What's your image of
just another stupid
smart mouthed
guess what you
were there
at some point
and don't deny
how you

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Ha-5-rika said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 10:45 am
I do have this problem in my life. My parents are even against me, writing. Wonderfully writen.
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:24 pm
thankn u parents r parents :P
samiasaskia24 said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 1:11 pm
I don't really have this problem but I understand because of others! Well written!!!
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 5:41 pm
thanks much appreciated :P
booklover04 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 9:41 am
i think like this alllll the time haha nice job with the rythm and emotion. however like people have said before there should have been a question mark on the second line :)
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 1:27 pm
i agree and thanks  sorry about the question mark can u tell me why all the screen names have VIP in green next to them?
booklover04 replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 9:10 pm
i think the VIP things are new, they just symbolize the more active writers and commenters on Teenink. its kind of wierd cause almost everyone has it lol :)
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:33 pm
I think it's kinda annoying
ttlove21 said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:06 am
hey love it... you should check out my poems i published
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 11:08 pm
of course who r u?
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 3:00 am
So true... But you could have used question marks in some parts :)
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 2:41 pm
ah i just looked at where i could of used them and ur correct thanks for the corrections :P
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:21 pm

My only criticism:

"...guess what you were there to."  'To' should be 'too'.

musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:22 pm
ok thanks for the critism hope i spelled it right
Delictious said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:13 pm
I like this one! A lot of people can relate I bet, I sure can. 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 11:48 pm
first thanks a bunch :p don't you think it's funny how parents act like they were always the perfect child and weren't ever the classic teen :P that's my opinion
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:07 pm
I like this one a lot! Good job!
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 9:54 pm
thanks i love the pic :P
divingforreality replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 1:46 am
Relatable teenage material.
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 10:28 pm
so cliche haha
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