Heartbeat

July 8, 2011
By PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)


Number one.
What lies waiting in the third beat
Of a heart:
Lub dub what?
I want to know why your
Words do that
To me…

Okay, take two.
I want to take your letters and drench
Them in crayon,
Rainbow-brown,
Because I can't stand the blankness
Between your words and,
And I don't want you to see me cry.

Three:


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For il miglior fabbro

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on Feb. 12 2013 at 3:18 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

Haha, thanks. I always planned to leave it like this. Its sort of experimental, but I wanted to leave it wanting.

on Feb. 2 2013 at 2:42 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I'd like to read the rest of this! Otherwise, it's great so far. (:

on Aug. 10 2011 at 11:27 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
5 articles 3 photos 178 comments
lol thats really dumb that they can just edit out words. this is a writing sight, we should be able to express ourselves through whatever words we want.

on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:45 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

what does the side thing mean interesting poem

on Jul. 30 2011 at 3:12 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

it should read

Lub dub what?

dam.nit, I want to know (etc). 


on Jul. 30 2011 at 2:20 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
42 articles 11 photos 333 comments
what did they cut out?

on Jul. 13 2011 at 12:01 am
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

eh, they edited a word or two out. Rhythm isn't the same now.


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