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this time called dawn



the sun warms its rays



as the moon turns away



ashamed



of it's pale insuffice light



and being short of silverware



the mist runsaway



anyway



at the touch of daylight





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TheGreightGutzby said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 8:22 pm
Hey I really like this one especially the line "as the moon turns away ashamed of its pale insufficient light" How have youve been?
 
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Apr. 18, 2012 at 7:29 pm

Hey, thanks. You seem to be the only one who likes my poetry.

I'm pretty good. Kind of tired of the world. Just want to get away. You?

 
ALM007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 8:02 pm
hey you should let me know when you'll be online, i have this story i wanted to toss around with someone..
 
TheGreightGutzby replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 8:17 pm

i can chat now if you want.

 

 
ALM007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 5:19 pm

hey sorry i missed you, i'm online now

i think i just missed again on poetry chat

 
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