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2 expections to vice myself

July 9, 2011
By hidingfrompain BRONZE, 20032, Washington
hidingfrompain BRONZE, 20032, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
will you walk with me or leave


my heart has snow in it while a humming bird attempts to subtract all of the pain,cry,and mad with the evil ways.If i had a question for you to transport my life in your hands would you say "sure" or its to hard to come across in this out flowing world.


The author's comments:
this piece make me think about how i can pick up something in life and i hope some one come across and feel the same way as me.

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on Jul. 19 2011 at 10:27 am
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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The ideas here are really good, for example, "out-flowing world," but it just needs some work on the grammar/punctuation and fluency.  Good job!

on Jul. 12 2011 at 9:08 pm
hidingfrompain BRONZE, 20032, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
will you walk with me or leave

if you have any comments of how you like it post one thanks.