2 expections to vice myself

July 9, 2011
my heart has snow in it while a humming bird attempts to subtract all of the pain,cry,and mad with the evil ways.If i had a question for you to transport my life in your hands would you say "sure" or its to hard to come across in this out flowing world.

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TotheSea said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 10:27 am
The ideas here are really good, for example, "out-flowing world," but it just needs some work on the grammar/punctuation and fluency.  Good job!
lifes said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 9:08 pm
if you have any comments of how you like it post one thanks.
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