Drea(Awake)ming

July 7, 2011
By Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have to be a little insane to live life extraordinary.


It should just so happen
That she should be here tonight,
Of all the places I've gone
She arrived in my dream.

A special kind of dream,
One that twists and flows,
It is much like life
Is it life?

No, no, no,
It simply can not be.
Reality has never been so kind,
As to lend to me the beauty of one like her.

Have I reached the point,
Where my heart has found love,
Where dream and reality have
Swapped places?

Do my senses deceive me?
Am I to awake?
How will I ever know?
I won't

Or maybe
Just maybe
One kiss
From reality?

I hope

The author's comments:
I usually try and rhyme but I thought that this time I would sort of let my fingers wander across the keyboard, typing as they please. What I have left is an interesting poem, at least I find it interesting.

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on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:47 am
Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have to be a little insane to live life extraordinary.

Thank you everyone for the encouraging words. It really makes me feel appreciated when I hear that people are enjoying what I write.

A_Journey GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 4:35 pm
A_Journey GOLD, Tampa, Florida
16 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Muse of Poetry should not know that roses in manure grow. ~The Formula, Langston Hughes
You may write me down in history with your bitter, twisted ties. You may trod me in the very dirt, but still, like dirt, I rise. ~Still I Rise, Maya Angelou

Really good. Even if it doesn't have a rhyme scheme, it still has that poetic feel around it. Sorry, can't find a better way to describe it :P

btw, can you check out my poem Hidden? Thanks!


Ally_H. GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 3:38 pm
Ally_H. GOLD, Bridgeport, West Virginia
18 articles 26 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don\'t matter and those who matter don\'t mind.

I really enjoyed this. I've never read any of your rhyming poems, but the whole "not rhyming" thing totally works for you.  Good job(:

on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:27 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

I love your work!

on Jul. 12 2011 at 12:48 pm
Casual.dreamer SILVER, Bakersfield, California
6 articles 0 photos 40 comments
amazing. Look at some of my work?

Casper GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 4:13 am
Casper GOLD, Couer D&#39 Alene, Idaho
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you still...But I love him just as much and he hasn't hurt me like you have" -Casper-

Wow, this is really good!(: keep up the good work(:


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