Drea(Awake)ming

July 7, 2011
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It should just so happen
That she should be here tonight,
Of all the places I've gone
She arrived in my dream.

A special kind of dream,
One that twists and flows,
It is much like life
Is it life?

No, no, no,
It simply can not be.
Reality has never been so kind,
As to lend to me the beauty of one like her.

Have I reached the point,
Where my heart has found love,
Where dream and reality have
Swapped places?

Do my senses deceive me?
Am I to awake?
How will I ever know?
I won't

Or maybe
Just maybe
One kiss
From reality?

I hope





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Maxwell_SQ said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 11:47 am
Thank you everyone for the encouraging words. It really makes me feel appreciated when I hear that people are enjoying what I write.
 
Cookieluvr said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 4:35 pm

Really good. Even if it doesn't have a rhyme scheme, it still has that poetic feel around it. Sorry, can't find a better way to describe it :P

btw, can you check out my poem Hidden? Thanks!

 
Ally_H. said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 3:38 pm
I really enjoyed this. I've never read any of your rhyming poems, but the whole "not rhyming" thing totally works for you.  Good job(:
 
AllysonMarie said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:27 pm
I love your work!
 
Casual.dreamer said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:48 pm
amazing. Look at some of my work?
 
Casper said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 4:13 am
Wow, this is really good!(: keep up the good work(:
 
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