If Love Was A Currency

July 4, 2011
By Dancer26 SILVER, Concord, North Carolina
Dancer26 SILVER, Concord, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Beauty is in the heart of the beholder."
- Al Bernstein

"Beauty itself is but the sensible image of the infinite."
-George Bancroft


If love was a currency
you'd always be close to me
I would exchange every
penny I have to
express my love to you,
I wouldn't be frugal with you
I'd learn to save you
and only spend you
when I need you the most
I'd keep you in the bank
of my heart
with deposits of hugs and kisses

The author's comments:
Do you think I should add more?

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on Jul. 10 2014 at 8:51 pm
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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I really like this cause I feel the same way about love, a lot of the things you said really resonated with me. And it's really sweet :)

on May. 3 2013 at 7:16 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Awesome poem! My only critizism, is the over usage of the word "you". But beside that minor deatil, it was fine. Perfect actually. And to answer your question: no, do not make this longer, it is short and well spent, just like money. Impeccable job. Keep rockin!


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