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Fallen Angel

She wanders the world,
from dawn to dusk,
a creature of the skies,
a fallen angel.
She knows she is not meant to be here,
she keeps searching, searching . . .
for a way out of this frustration,
but she cannot resist the calling arms
of this planet,
and the frustration fades,
but comes back later,
always too late.
She feels she cannot live
unless she inhales the sweet scent
of the blossoming flowers.
She can barely imagine existing
unless she drinks up its nectar
and caressing every form of matter.
She is a being of a world,
lost in the seeming beauty of another,
whether she will be strong and willing enough
to return to her true place once again,
nobody can tell for sure.




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Lexie96 said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 4:54 pm:
I like this a lot and I especially love it for the metaphors. Do you think maybe you could check out my poem Sowing Poppies, please?
 
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Gloria_dorce said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 7:24 pm:

i completley understand :) it is a wonderful poem and you have great interpretation of life :) I would love to read more of your work :) please read some of mine :)

 

 
dia.dreamer replied...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 10:27 am :
thank you!!! yes, I'll definitely read yours....read my poem Desire's Whisper too....
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 4:50 pm:
Uhhhhh - OK. I don't really understand it, but it definitely sounds interesting!
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:26 am :
it's about how people fall into something they're not meant to be in, like angels falling on earth, but they get too attracted/addicted to their situation that after a while, they can't change, even if they want to. (like drug addicts)
 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 1:34 pm:
Beautiful! This is an amazing metaphor. Keep writing!!!
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 7:11 am :
thanks, Lola! (if that's your name)
 
Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 11:42 am :
Ha Ha! It's not (just a pen name), but I'm thinking of changing my name to that when I'm old enough. : )
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:26 am :
oh, hey, there's something in common between us - Dia is not my real name, but a nickname, and I'm planning to change it too. :)
 
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HeidiJoy12 said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 12:18 am:
Very good!! Amazing word choice.
 
Dia.dreamer replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 7:42 am :
thanks! :) check out my other poems too.
 
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LostinMusic said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 11:55 am:
I love it! Its very good :)
 
Dia.dreamer replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 8:09 am :
:D thanks!! I love your work toooo...!
 
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Pooja11 said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 8:58 pm:

"She is a being of a world,
lost in the seeming beauty of another"

Cool line btw. :) 

(Check my other works too)

 
Dia.dreamer replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 4:57 am :

thanks. :)

You write really well...I read Utopia and fell in love with it, and now I'm reading the Sindhi Metamorphosis..

 
Pooja11 replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 8:05 pm :
Aww thanks. Hope u enjoy it. 
 
Dia.dreamer replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 9:45 am :
you're welcome. :D and yeah, I DID enjoy it. you're really good.
 
Pooja11 replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 6:50 pm :
Thanks yaar! I wrote this one Mader Bozor-e-man...its actually a true story...abt my nani. Check that out too, Divya :)
 
thinkaholic15 replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 10:44 am :
sure, I will. (and does everyone know my real name now?)
 
thinkaholic15 replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 10:44 am :
hey, I changed my username, and yet the rest of the comments are under the same other username. huh.
 
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