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To Sit on the Moon

July 5, 2011
By Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"


Sometimes I want to sit on the moon and watch the world dance on its path. At night I’m watch by millions people and others of passionate intentions kissing under my light. Some nights I feel alone and half wanted but still loved by others under light and other nights I don’t want to be seen only to have time to think and worry of my intentions….. Wondering why I get so cold. I will always shine no matter how dark I’ve been.

Some nights I watch the world of people in disappointment of obliterated sense and others without worry not knowing where there mind leads only to know of who they are or what there not. I see myself now with many changes, sometimes dark, sometimes light; I’m always hot and always cold.

I’m never alone. I dance the path of an eternity not knowing where my mind might lead. So to say what I am.

I’m not that far from human.

The author's comments:
i was thinking, we are so much alike to everything and anything so why not the moon. don't we appear and hide like the moon , don't we wounder?

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Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 3:34 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Interesting thought...

on Jul. 26 2011 at 10:35 am
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

i feel the moon as myself, people go on about vampires and the moon transforming them but its a shame because the moon is so much more, but i feel bad for it because it has to watch our destructive behavior and ignorance but gets to see the love of one another. the world is like a giant heart, theirs war and love

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 6:21 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Wow, this is very beautiful! :)

I love the moon. And this is how I always think of the moon! And I adore your poem. :)


on Jul. 14 2011 at 11:32 am
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

thats alright :D

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 9:59 am
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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i'd like to but i cant. we can talk through the comments here or a forum?? :) i wish these profiles had messages n all tht lol

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 9:57 am
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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ur welcome

on Jul. 12 2011 at 9:30 pm
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

can i email you somehow or like do you have a face book account or something???????

on Jul. 12 2011 at 9:19 pm
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

thanks, but its true we all hide like the moon espesholy when we go cold ;D

on Jul. 12 2011 at 9:01 pm
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

no affence in that i was tierd when i wrote yhis and forgot to correct it lol, thatnks for likeing it

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 6:24 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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i am in total awe of how you get your ideas and are very creative :)

ur poem has such a deep meaning...

though honestly i think that if u put it umm... like not more rhymey but.. like not in a big chunk, it'd be better but thts just my opinion, dnt take offense in tht :))


Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 6:19 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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i definitely agree n like ur comment bout how people appear n hide like the moon