July 1, 2011
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I love the way you
Dream about each other
And laugh at the same time
When I sit here like
A third wheel on the side.

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gigi01 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:05 am
Wow! I love how you convey such a short yet powerful meaning in so few words!! Great job!!! Check out my poem, "Fireflies and Stars" or "Lord, You are my Comfort."
DeusExMachina said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:01 am
excellent. short sweet, and gets the message across without being whiney! haha
.Izzy. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:13 am
Short and simple but gets the message across...I like it!
bookworm29 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 6:07 pm
I know how that feels: being a third wheel...its really uncomfortable but you must have nerves of steel or a wicked sense of humor to be thinking that when in such an uncomfortable position.
thetruthishere94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 12:31 am
i laughed when i read this. I just love the sarcasm you put into a poem! i like it!
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