Never To Awaken

July 1, 2011
Can't breathe
I need a way out,
this dream is
crazy, insane, a living
I can't escape
some one help
no one can hear
me screaming
with in the
I can't breathe
never to awaken
from this awful
nightmare of

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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 8:03 pm

I like it, but I feel like the end could have been just slightly better. I get why it was what it was, but I don't know... it just doesn't sound completely right to me. It does draw the reader in, though, so kudos on that.

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