True Friends

July 1, 2011
True friends wouldn't stab you in the back, like you did to me every chance you got.
They don't use you for things they need while you're hurting inside. True friends don't put you down when you thought you couldn't go any deeper.
My pain was your happiness,your friendship was a lie.
You used me when needed without a word of gratitude.
Now I finally realize, you didn't care for me.
Our friendship was a game to you.
And I was nothing but a piece that was disposable at any moment.
So good luck finding a true friend, without being one yourself.





Join the Discussion

This article has 2 comments. Post your own now!

abbya said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 8:56 pm
i went thru the exact same thing hun :/
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 5:50 am
This poem speaks for almost everyone. I hope I can find a true friend just by being one.

For criticisms, the poem doesn't have the flow, if you know what I mean. You can try reciting it to see for yourself.

-But overall, this poem is good and the meaning is in it! :)
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback