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Hidden

I'm holding the key,
Searching desperately,
For the lock.
The lock that can't be seen.

Hidden rooms,
Hidden doors,
Hidden futures.
What do they hold?

I'm holding the key,
Searching desperately,
For the lock.
The lock that can't be seen.





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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:26 am
This was great! You have a great way of getting the meaning across the reader! Keep up the good work! and thanks for commenting on my story!! :)(:
 
A_Journey replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 3:58 pm
Thank you! :D
 
Maxwell_SQ said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 11:55 am
I think we have all felt this way at one time or another. I know I have. 6 months ago I wouldn't dare share my poetry with anyone, 3 years ago there was no way I was getting on stage to play my bass. It is a hurdle we all face- having a talent and not knowing what to do with it, just like you said. 5 stars, I really enjoyed this.
 
Cookieluvr replied...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 2:05 pm
Thank you! I'm trying to get past that hurdle too :-)
 
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